The Totality of Everything

Mysteriously

Your endless twilight lives on

Automatically
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Thank you for all the wonderful comments...
Laan Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 10:45 AM
Nancy, congrats on your win, great visuals.
Poet Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 9:21 AM
This is a wonderful write nancy!Congrats on your win---kashinath
Haick Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 6:12 PM
! Congratulations on your deserving win in the contest, Nancy! "Endless twilight" it is! Always, Annalise
Guzzi Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Interesting concept. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Rick, nancy
Devonshire Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:43 PM
This is very clever and quite profound, Nancy. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations Nancy on your ninth place win...excellent haiku!! Good to see you in the top ten. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:00 PM
Congrats Nancy on your top ten win in Rick's cool contest with this elegant entry luv.. enjoy your sweet success ....
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations Nancy on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:45 AM
BEST cheers for winning in this contest, nancy.. i'm light-struck!:) huggs
Mehta Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 12:15 PM
I agree with you totally that His Twilight is mysterious and automatic, nancy
La France Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 10:19 AM
interesting write, one must think about this one~~
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