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The Titanic That Survived

It started it's journey with grace, venturing into the ocean formed by droplet of happiness,sorrow,good,evil, love,wisdom,birth,death,to be ultimately called by one single name,The Ocean of Life. Packed with boarders who were beautiful poets, this majestic Queen had one little difference, the boarders were crew themselves,who with their constant individual effort kept this vessel moving forward. It was all going well,until in some unfortunate way, petty differences proliferated almost amongst the entire crews,subliminally perceiving themselves as boarders,they forgot their true roles and unconsciously steered the vessel into the perilous region of the iceberg. The fateful day finally arrived,when the collision occurred, the distress signal was about to be given,when some brave crews proclaimed their intention to steer this vessel to the nearest land,inspired by this act of courage all the others joined in putting aside their differences and somehow the vessel survived. Still recovering from the effect of the collision,this injured Queen is repaired by the same old crews and some fresh energetic new ones,but suddenly the same old problems have crawled out again,exploring the history of the past incident, a lonely crew somehow notices them and decides to share his warning message. Inspired by Sir Dementrios's excellent poem "In the name of God" I would hate to see this pure poetic sanctuary be tainted by some petty wars among poets.Please poets cast aside your differences and inhale the scent of the heavenly breeze that flows in this place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/6/2016 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Miraj! It seems almost unbelievable that a humble Monoku of mine would inspire such a majestic poem of yours! What is important here the fact you have joined in to stop those who are fighting! Yes, we have to put our egos aside and let divinity in us prevail for the common good of the Soup and the happiness of its members! THANK YOU FROM THE DEPTHS OF MY HEART FOR YOUR CONCERN! GOD LOVES YOU FOR IT! A seven!
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:55:00 PM
Lovely thoughts Miraj. I sure hope peace reigns.
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