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The Tiny House

The tiny house is tucked away deep within the woods The tiny house has lost its footing and so a faded sign is tacked to the tiny house's frame: 'DANGER' I guess that's why the tiny house is painted red.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/9/2019 11:47:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this first offering to the soup. This is quite clever.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2019 3:25:00 PM

I like the image you depict, and the good use of word matching, Allen. Regards // paul

Komal Walimbe

Date: 4/3/2019 2:42:00 AM

very nice

Susan Mills

Date: 4/2/2019 10:32:00 AM

A stop sign is the color red. Yes, red can mean danger. I wrote a poem a while back about a tiny room and posted it on poetry soup. I like your featured poem.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 4/2/2019 5:49:00 AM

tiny house in red paint!// beautiful poetic expression

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/26/2019 2:06:00 AM

I have read a few, to be sure, so now you know I like! Great poetry!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2019 8:45:00 AM

... it sounds like a cozy red cabin in the woods ... why "DANGER" ? - // Sun :)