Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Poet Free verse

The Tiny House

The tiny house is tucked away
deep within the woods

The tiny house has lost its footing 
and so a faded sign
is tacked to the tiny house's frame:
    'DANGER'

I guess that's why
the tiny house
is painted red.

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Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2019 at 11:47 AM I enjoyed reading this first offering to the soup. This is quite clever.

Paul Callus April 3, 2019 at 3:25 PM I like the image you depict, and the good use of word matching, Allen. Regards // paul

Komal Walimbe April 3, 2019 at 2:42 AM very nice

Susan Mills April 2, 2019 at 10:32 AM A stop sign is the color red. Yes, red can mean danger. I wrote a poem a while back about a tiny room and posted it on poetry soup. I like your featured poem.

Mahtab Bangalee April 2, 2019 at 5:49 AM tiny house in red paint!// beautiful poetic expression

Arthur Vaso March 26, 2019 at 2:06 AM I have read a few, to be sure, so now you know I like! Great poetry!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2019 at 8:45 AM ... it sounds like a cozy red cabin in the woods ... why "DANGER" ? - // Sun :)