The Tin Man

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dIoleidZAiQ He holds his own heart in his hands but doesn't feel it the tin feels cold to the touch I think he was hurt too much wearing a funnel over his head he smokes away his dreams he wants to be loved but, you can't give what you don't get To anyone who feels unloved today the sun says, "I Love You " as it lands on the vessel but not the man whos lonesome and gray he tilts his shadow towards the big forest feeling all hollow inside no he doesn't remember the last time he suddenly, cried... Rain begins to drum against his breastplate armor he begins to rust he hears a tiny whisper a seedling in the morning dawn, " heh you" "me?" he says, as little fires start, in his impassive eyes of gold "yes you" says the voice, you're more then just tin, I LOVE YOU! he opens the little trap door and feels a gush of red, Achew ! For the first time in his life he feels the cold, the sun, the rain, its insane he can now walk without a creak, he's been oiled with love and he feels right as rain.

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Date: 8/7/2020 10:36:00 AM
This is a Beautiful expression, my friend
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Date: 8/6/2020 1:51:00 PM
Especially as one ages, few things can compare with the warmth of the rising sun on cold flesh and bones! Well caught! Aloha! Rico
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