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The Time We Are Given

these days our world seems
to crumble all around us
there's been a time warp
a glitch in the fabric of the universe
shaking the walls of our beliefs

to the depths of our silence
it's the truths that seem
to ring the loudest over yonder
we'll survive and for it will be stronger

no we'll never be the same
blindsided in our vulnerabilities

if nothing else~
we'll never take for granted
the tomorrows of our life



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~THE TIME WE ARE GIVEN~ 2023

AP: Honorable Mention 2021, Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mcguire Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 9:15 PM
I appreciate this write, so good.
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 11:43 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Timothy.
Brewer Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Apposite sensitive and elegant lines for these days. This is a very intelligent and well written poem, Line. Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 1:00 AM
Thank you so much, Geoffrey. Most appreciated.
Achilles Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 6:45 AM
Such true words. keep safe.
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Thank, Julie. Hopefully everyone is being safe.
Somadas Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 4:44 AM
if nothing else~we'll never take for granted the tomorrows of our life..true..may be it is an eye-opener for so many.. wonderful lines..
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.
Watt Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 5:35 PM
"Blindsided in our vulnerabilities". So true. Thank you for your encouraging conclusion, Line. I'm sure I will one day realize how much I have come to take for granted, and will vow not to do so again.
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
Hawkens Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 3:47 PM
Line, I miss your wonderful poems. Thank you for this wonderful poem
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Thanks, JC, for your lovely note.
Smith Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 2:35 PM
No doubt Line...
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Thanks, Charlie.
Bauer Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 1:43 PM
well said, line! i agree with you that we'll never be the same again...
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 8:45 AM
So true, Ilene.
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