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The Time Between Seasons Premiere Contest Winner

Spring dresses bare trees with satin leaves of jade green Sunlight's fingers touch daffodils, coaxing them to bloom Robins bathe their wings in morning dew as they preen On the breath of dawn there's a sweet scent of perfume. Month by month and season to season Separated only by the hands of time Nature's pendulum never offers a reason for turning calendar pages with each chime Summer arrives, waving her heated scepter while she reigns Some play on sandy shores before enjoying a swim in the sea. Crops are nourished with watering cans of afternoon rains It's the season I enjoy sitting in the shade, drinking iced tea. Month by month and season to season Separated only by the hands of time Nature's pendulum never offers a reason for turning calendar pages with each chime Autumn paints bold landscapes crimson, russet and gold Leaves cascade from their limbs and tumble to the ground This grieves my heart, but Mother Nature, I cannot scold for pruning trees each year. To fulfill her duty, she is bound. Month by month and season to season Separated only by the hands of time Nature's pendulum never offers a reason for turning calendar pages with each chime Winter sweeps across the land on winds laced with snow. Time to skate on frozen lakes and enjoy bobsled rides How beautiful the frigid months that quickly seem to flow like the progression of seasons that ebb like ocean tides. Month by month and season to season Separated only by the hands of time Nature's pendulum never offers a reason for turning calendar pages with each chime Year after year with reverence sublime July 15, 2022 The Time Between The Seasons Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 8/3/2022 2:23:00 PM
Beautiful poem! I especially love your refrain. Congrats on First!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/3/2022 3:01:00 PM
thanks a lot, Ann.
Date: 8/2/2022 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations Jenna: You painted us a vivid picture of the seasons. Hugs, SuZ
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/3/2022 3:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Suz.
Date: 8/2/2022 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing write/story/picture. I love This One. Have a great/blessed day................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/3/2022 3:40:00 AM
Thanks so much for visiting, Paula.
Date: 8/2/2022 12:24:00 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this muse of yours... very picturesque in your excellent poetic style, making me all the more delight in God-granted four seasons in your area, since I live in a country of two seasons... The photos you included are likewise delighting and delightful. God bless you.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/3/2022 3:40:00 AM
Thanks, Beata. I'm grateful for your kind words.
Date: 8/1/2022 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Jenna. Wonderful fresh images - "satin leaves of jade green." Very creative format like a song.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2022 12:41:00 PM
I'm pleased you liked it. Thanks, Sam.
Date: 8/1/2022 2:31:00 AM
Fabulous! Word craft of the highest level, congrats on your top win, Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2022 12:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker.
Date: 8/1/2022 2:21:00 AM
Brilliant Jenna your writing is rightly being endorsed as top quality, 3 contest wins in a row, how good is that, I’m delighted this particular Favourite of mine was a winner, way to go girl! Congratulations, Cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/1/2022 2:35:00 PM
Something’s not right that’s what it’s telling me, I know your not interested in lists, but at the same time, we like to gauge how our contest entries have performed overall, it is so disheartening to hear the rankings are not reliable
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2022 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, David. I've had 6 winning placements in the last 4 days and haven't moved up one notch on the contest winner list. What does that tell you? lol I don't give merit to any of those lists.
Date: 7/31/2022 10:04:00 PM
Wow Jenna, this is outstanding! Congratulations on winning the trophy! Blessings xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2022 12:39:00 PM
I'm as pleased with your comment as I am at being on the winning list. Thanks, Connie.
Date: 7/31/2022 8:54:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful wording Jenna, a much deserved first place! Congrats to you!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2022 12:38:00 PM
Thank you for such nice comments, Hat.
Date: 7/31/2022 6:43:00 PM
Such lovely imagery and now that I’ve judged I can see the wonderful accompanying picture you chose to highlight! I love your refrain. Love: Summer arrives, waving her heated scepter while she reigns & all the colors of Autumn & the excitement of Winter! Congratulations on your top win, Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/31/2022 7:21:00 PM
I am feeling so honored by this win, Kim. Thank you for finding merit in my lines, and for giving me feedback on what you liked most. I'm grateful.
Date: 7/15/2022 12:35:00 PM
WOW! Jenna, this is exquisite writing, a marvelous example of what good poetry should be. I loved the way you wrote a refrain that perfectly separated and conjoined your verses about the seasons. Very fine writing!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/15/2022 1:07:00 PM
Dear Milt, you are a poet whose comments I take sincerely, and value for your aptitude of judging quality poems, so without sounding like a braggart, I take your reviews as high praise.
Date: 7/15/2022 12:26:00 PM
Excellent Jenna a masterclass of verse and beautiful refrain bridging the poem together, you put a lot of work into this one, and I hope it gets its just reward, a big Fave cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/15/2022 1:05:00 PM
Thank you for the complimentary remarks, David. Comments received form poets whose writing I admire is reward enough. I also appreciate the fave.
Date: 7/15/2022 11:33:00 AM
A lovely poem, Jenna. I like the refrain as a whole stanza, in particular
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/15/2022 12:03:00 PM
Hi Jeff, and thanks. Some would say that as a refrain it's too long, but I thought if it bears repeating, it had to have a complete explanation. Actually, I wrote the refrain before any of the seasonal stanzas.
Date: 7/15/2022 11:00:00 AM
lovely! what a beautiful masterpiece! was quite refreshing to read
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/15/2022 12:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Husna.

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