Premiere Contest WinnerThe Time Between Seasons

Spring dresses bare trees with satin leaves of jade green
Sunlight's fingers touch daffodils, coaxing them to bloom
Robins bathe their wings in morning dew as they preen
On the breath of dawn there's a sweet scent of perfume.

Month by month and season to season
   Separated only by the hands of time
      Nature's pendulum never offers a reason
         for turning calendar pages with each chime

Summer arrives, waving her heated scepter while she reigns
Some play on sandy shores before enjoying a swim in the sea.
Crops are nourished with watering cans of afternoon rains
It's the season I enjoy sitting in the shade, drinking iced tea.

Month by month and season to season
   Separated only by the hands of time
      Nature's pendulum never offers a reason
         for turning calendar pages with each chime

Autumn paints bold landscapes crimson, russet and gold
Leaves cascade from their limbs and tumble to the ground
This grieves my heart, but Mother Nature, I cannot scold
for pruning trees each year. To fulfill her duty, she is bound.

Month by month and season to season
   Separated only by the hands of time
      Nature's pendulum never offers a reason
         for turning calendar pages with each chime

Winter sweeps across the land on winds laced with snow.
Time to skate on frozen lakes and enjoy bobsled rides
How beautiful the frigid months that quickly seem to flow
like the progression of seasons that ebb like ocean tides.

Month by month and season to season
   Separated only by the hands of time
      Nature's pendulum never offers a reason
         for turning calendar pages with each chime
              Year after year with reverence sublime


July 15, 2022
The Time Between The Seasons Contest
Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Peck Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Beautiful poem! I especially love your refrain. Congrats on First!
Logan Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 3:01 PM
thanks a lot, Ann.
Delaney Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 4:01 PM
Congratulations Jenna: You painted us a vivid picture of the seasons. Hugs, SuZ
Logan Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 3:41 AM
Thanks so much, Suz.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing write/story/picture. I love This One. Have a great/blessed day................
Logan Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 3:40 AM
Thanks so much for visiting, Paula.
Agustin Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 12:24 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this muse of yours... very picturesque in your excellent poetic style, making me all the more delight in God-granted four seasons in your area, since I live in a country of two seasons... The photos you included are likewise delighting and delightful. God bless you.
Logan Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 3:40 AM
Thanks, Beata. I'm grateful for your kind words.
Kauffman Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Jenna. Wonderful fresh images - "satin leaves of jade green." Very creative format like a song.
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 12:41 PM
I'm pleased you liked it. Thanks, Sam.
Seeker Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 2:31 AM
Fabulous! Word craft of the highest level, congrats on your top win, Jenna!
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 12:40 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 2:21 AM
Brilliant Jenna your writing is rightly being endorsed as top quality, 3 contest wins in a row, how good is that, I’m delighted this particular Favourite of mine was a winner, way to go girl! Congratulations, Cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 2:35 PM
Something’s not right that’s what it’s telling me, I know your not interested in lists, but at the same time, we like to gauge how our contest entries have performed overall, it is so disheartening to hear the rankings are not reliable
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, David. I've had 6 winning placements in the last 4 days and haven't moved up one notch on the contest winner list. What does that tell you? lol I don't give merit to any of those lists.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 10:04 PM
Wow Jenna, this is outstanding! Congratulations on winning the trophy! Blessings xxoo
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 12:39 PM
I'm as pleased with your comment as I am at being on the winning list. Thanks, Connie.
Bueckert Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:54 PM
Absolutely beautiful wording Jenna, a much deserved first place! Congrats to you!!
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 12:38 PM
Thank you for such nice comments, Hat.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:43 PM
Such lovely imagery and now that I’ve judged I can see the wonderful accompanying picture you chose to highlight! I love your refrain. Love: Summer arrives, waving her heated scepter while she reigns & all the colors of Autumn & the excitement of Winter! Congratulations on your top win, Jenna!
Logan Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:21 PM
I am feeling so honored by this win, Kim. Thank you for finding merit in my lines, and for giving me feedback on what you liked most. I'm grateful.
Hankins Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 12:35 PM
WOW! Jenna, this is exquisite writing, a marvelous example of what good poetry should be. I loved the way you wrote a refrain that perfectly separated and conjoined your verses about the seasons. Very fine writing!
Logan Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 1:07 PM
Dear Milt, you are a poet whose comments I take sincerely, and value for your aptitude of judging quality poems, so without sounding like a braggart, I take your reviews as high praise.
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Excellent Jenna a masterclass of verse and beautiful refrain bridging the poem together, you put a lot of work into this one, and I hope it gets its just reward, a big Fave cheers David
Logan Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 1:05 PM
Thank you for the complimentary remarks, David. Comments received form poets whose writing I admire is reward enough. I also appreciate the fave.
Kyser Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 11:33 AM
A lovely poem, Jenna. I like the refrain as a whole stanza, in particular
Logan Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Hi Jeff, and thanks. Some would say that as a refrain it's too long, but I thought if it bears repeating, it had to have a complete explanation. Actually, I wrote the refrain before any of the seasonal stanzas.
Mirza Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 11:00 AM
lovely! what a beautiful masterpiece! was quite refreshing to read
Logan Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 12:01 PM
Thank you so very much, Husna.
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