The Tides Motel Palm Beach Blvd

My bus finally pulled in late 
you were there as promised 
although I  tried not to notice 
the blonde bimbo adjusting 
her skirt a cross between 
pat benatar and Melanie griffith 
puffing on a stale Marlboro 
cigarette while painting lipstick 
on her collagen strickened pink 
lips just like you to be charmed 
to give her a light lucky strip 
matchbook it didn't bother me 
surprisingly enough I had no 
reaction I must admit Reno Nevada 
conditioned me to a soft spoken kind 
of acceptance to your philandering
anticipated antics gambling again 
on goods of service however 
I was quite flattered you still 
tried to conceal infidelity funny 
it was rather attractive why you 
absolutely appeared boyishly shy 
caught in the cookie jar again 
fishing for snacks besides our 
relationships had already exceeded 
the life span of any failed marriage 
why we continued charades was even
more morbidly interesting to say 
the least after all we were both 
married to other people an yet 
faithful to our personal ongoing
trisks enterages rondevues 
at anyrate the stars were very 
bright tonight 3:40 am the tides 
were unseemingly calm wouldn't 
you say what's the room number 
did you lose the key again dam 
I've broken another heel 
just put the bags here dear
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Buhagiar Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 1:24 AM
You are quite the free spirit, flitting as you want. A great story, wonder if it's true.
Nicholsen Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 3:47 AM
Thank you so much Victor many blessings
Rodgers Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 12:06 PM
Dear Yolanda, I felt the raw and honest portrayal of a complicated relationship dynamic. I particularly loved how the ending with the broken heel and the lost key was the perfect touch of vulnerability amidst the chaos. Yolanda, I think you have a true gift for poetic storytelling - Blessings, My Friend Daniel
Nicholsen Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Thank you so much for your compassion and kindness Many blessings to you Daniel.
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