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The moon was rising pulling at the sea – toying with it, gutsy and playful. I felt the commotion racing me, tugging at me – drenching me. Right up ‘til tides ebbed, baring again the hard shingles of life. AP: 2nd place 2022 Collaboration with Chandana Ramachandran Posted on January 31, 2022

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Date: 2/8/2022 2:00:00 PM
So like the moon, excellent pen.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2022 9:59:00 AM
Most appreciated, thank you ML~
Date: 2/3/2022 4:32:00 PM
Its when the tides ebb we need our strength.. Great poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2022 7:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy ~
Date: 1/31/2022 3:16:00 PM
A playful moment then reality. ~ hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/31/2022 7:48:00 PM
Hi Kim, Thanks for the visit and comment ~

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