The Tickling Tanka

Plip plop plip plop falls
the raindrops on the red leaves
as the blue breeze keeps
fondling the fragrant buds and
the tickling shakes the tree trunk


July 10, 2018
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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 6:21 PM
Hell Probir, I like this poem you have created.The sound of the rain drops is beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 1:11 PM
- Rainy music, lovely tanka Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 1:24 AM
Thank you
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