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The Thunderstorm

When the tree in the bush are yearning and the blue skies are angry, the dark clouds will blaze and bark so when the dark cloud are crying out loud and the leaves are drinking, I know nature is the one singing Singing songs of succor to the plants that are poor, who’s beating the drums? …the thunderstorms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/2/2010 5:23:00 PM
Yeah, I never really thought about it, but T-storms are a pretty good write! I might have to try one out. Hey, did you know you have a moving haiku in there? : When the tree in the bush - are crying out loud - who’s beating the drums? >8)
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Date: 6/1/2009 3:47:00 AM
Strange coincidence Adeleke. I see we both wrote about "thunderstorms". Your imagination is very creative and vivid. Good work.
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Date: 5/31/2009 12:30:00 PM
Nice poem, thunderstorms are so cool. Nature showing her power, just awesome>James
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