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The Thunder Storm In November

One day we had rain
Then freezing rain
The following day 
A thunder storm came
The thunder was loud
Followed by lightening bright

It lasted all morning
Through the afternoon
With crackles of thunder
then bright lightening
It stormed like this 
all afternoon 
The evening peaceful

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David Smith

December 15, 2023 at 11:09 AM

Nice. You paced this well with ending that dovetails nicely. We just experienced such a storm this month in NZ. Don't forget to treat yourself these holidays. Regards David in NZ

Darlene De Beaulieu

December 15, 2023 at 2:37 PM

Hello David ,Thank you for the lovely comment. Was the thunder storm in the evening? Oh, thatr is a good ides. i will treat myself on this holiday. Merry Christmas. Cheers!! /Darlene/

Christina Bowring

December 1, 2023 at 11:46 AM

Really enjoyed reading this thunderstorm poem dear Darlene which was so atmospheric. I too, am scared of thunderstorms when I’m outside. You have captured the weather elements well here and I love the sense of calm as your poem concludes. An enjoyable read. Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings and smiles to you :):)

Darlene De Beaulieu

December 2, 2023 at 9:54 AM

Hello Christina Bowring, So nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Thunder storms can be scary when being in the wrong place when it happens. I just warch from a distance3 from the window. i do not go out in thundere streoms.Blessings to you Christina. /Darlene/

Ink Empress

December 1, 2023 at 1:37 AM

Dear Darlene, i love how smoothly your lines flow really. And how you tell us your stories seamlessly, i personally hate thunderstorms, i get really scared. I can imagine the freezing rain and thunderstorm through your words. But the ending is beautiful. A reminder that theres always peace after chaos. And as i write this comment its thundering here. Sending you light always. Pleasure reading

Darlene De Beaulieu

December 1, 2023 at 11:09 AM

Hello Ink Empress, Thank you for the lovely comment. I do not like thunder storms ether They c an be dangerous. i watch them from inside. Where i am safe. HYes there is always pece after the thun der storms. Stay indoors. Thank you . Enjoy your day my friend./ Darlene/

Mike Gentile

November 20, 2023 at 4:19 AM

Darlene, you've truly captured the Autumnal tempest !! The peaceful ending is always so wonderful! Happy Monday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 20, 2023 at 2:49 PM

Hello Mike, Thank you Mike. How are you? We had a frosty night. No snow yet. I am not anxious for the snow. Happy Monday. xxxx-ooooo./Darlene/

Karen Croft

November 18, 2023 at 1:14 AM

I love thunderstorms and lightning!

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 18, 2023 at 11:09 AM

Hello Karen, I do to. As long as I am indoors. Hugs. /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

November 15, 2023 at 12:05 PM

My dear Darlene, at least you had a peaceful evening. Love the poem my friend. That's what we have nowadays. Guess what?...that's the weather. Here, now it never stops raining. Many rivers flooded, but anyway we just hope one day stops. Beautiful poem. Take carexxxx

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 15, 2023 at 3:40 PM

Hello Maria, Well uI hope that the rain will stop there for a while. It was odd to have frewezing rain when we did not have any snowfall. odd to have a thunder storm in November. You take care to. Hugs.xxx/Darlene/

William Kelii Kekaula

November 15, 2023 at 11:41 AM

Aloha, Darlene. We have those too here in Hilo. We are on the windward (wet) side of Hawaii where the mountain snow melts into cascading waterfalls--quite a bit of them, pouring through streams hiding neath overgrowth of forest greens, and then there are our beaches, Oh My Goodness. Thunder and lightning are also no stranger to us. Take care, my friend. Mahalo William

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 15, 2023 at 3:50 PM

Hello Hillo Poet, Be careful of those thunder storms. It sounds like you have them often. I love the waterfalls. I love the sound of the waves. enjoy your evening myu friend. /Darlene/

Mulu Magdalinos

November 15, 2023 at 11:31 AM

Hello Darlene, raging storms are not frequent,in my area,generally speaking storms are dangerous natural phenomena.Have a blessed day!!

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 15, 2023 at 3:47 PM

Hello Mulu, Yes storms in your area are dangerous natural phenomena. take c are my friend. /Darlene/

Tony Hargreaves

November 14, 2023 at 12:27 PM

I know these storms well. In our hills they bring hell. Enjoyed your poem. Tony.

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 15, 2023 at 10:04 AM

Hello Tony, oh you know these thunder storms well. I found it strange to have freezing rain in November when we did not have snow yet. I sense you get it worse than i do. Myh friend. enjohy your evening. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 14, 2023 at 11:05 AM

- I don't like thunderstorms ... scary, Darlene - Great written :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 14, 2023 at 11:44 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, I do not like them, either. I rather listen to just rain falling. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

November 13, 2023 at 10:52 AM

I enjoyed your wonderful rain write. We need rain so send it this way. Hahaha!!! Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 13, 2023 at 3:38 PM

Hello Paula, Oh, i will try. Ha-Ha,ha,Ha. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/ Hugs.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

November 13, 2023 at 12:33 AM

Great event on a November to remember. I love this simple but great poem my good friend. How are you? Long time.no see... ??

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

November 14, 2023 at 12:00 PM

Thank you so much Dalene, I am doing great by GOD'S Grace. Thank you for asking and extend my regards to everyone, even your cat.

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 13, 2023 at 7:43 AM

Hello Charles Ink, yes i know. sorry for that I have been taking care of my cat. I am b ack now and I will comment on your poetry. Yes it is a month to remember. My good friend. How are you doing? Bye for now. My good frioend./Darlene/

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