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The Threads of Flaw - Acquarian

A crack In each object The reason why we get Precious light. Diamond With a defect Better than flawless stone To be preferred’ Black spot Flaw of the moon But its absence will mean Beauty has flaw.
+++++++ April 20, 2014 Form: Acquarian Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Threads by nette onclaud

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Date: 4/24/2014 11:11:00 PM
WAy to go in the contest, Dr. Ram. A worthy win!
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Date: 4/24/2014 3:59:00 AM
Talent so great speaks for itself Dr Ram ! wonderful write,,, loved this one,,congrats !
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Date: 4/23/2014 2:32:00 PM
So nice to share a spot with your talented pen, Dr. Ram! Congratulations !!
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Date: 4/23/2014 12:30:00 PM
congratulations Dr Ram on a well deserved win
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dr. Ram. ...a merited one indeed! // paul
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:31:00 AM
a gem of a piece, dr. ram.. sweet congrats on your fine win in my contest!.. huggs
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/23/2014 10:37:00 PM
Thanks for the appreciation, nette
Date: 4/23/2014 10:14:00 AM
Very nice... Congratulations Dr. Ram on winning in this contest... Verlena
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Date: 4/21/2014 5:46:00 AM
deep and lovely Ram great pen ty for liking Robin Hood hugs
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Date: 4/20/2014 1:38:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Flaws make the beautiful part better..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Thanks for reading and finding the work worthy of the win..Sara
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Date: 4/20/2014 12:23:00 PM
very good way to do the theme, Dr. Ram. I am sure it will be on her list.
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Date: 4/20/2014 9:25:00 AM
I like this metaphor very much. Thanks Ram.
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:49:00 AM
Very good Dr Ram , excellent chain xx
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