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The thoughts of a bi-polar

Who am I and what am I to say?, All I've got to do is play, Along in a game I don't understand, Make people come to my land, A deal that you don't think about, Something thats going to start out, A trend that will last for years, Making people come to tears, Arguing points that don't get across, Having to deal with a great loss, This is my life and these are my words, Circling around like I'm in herds, Playing games with my head, Maybe I would be better off dead.

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Date: 6/26/2010 2:18:00 PM
People will always try to play head games with each other. Just jump right in the middle and show them that you would be overpowered. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/26/2010 12:55:00 AM
i hope you're not a bi-polar and are just speaking on behalf of bi-polars.. this is a very touchy subject to me coz i have a friend who's a bi-polar and she worries me soo.. you wrote this poem well.. congratulations on being featured today=) i hope you're having fun.. lizann
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:08:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:47:00 PM
Very interesting poem here. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:53:00 PM
I am like you Jonathon, I do not likes these kinds of games. It is to bad there a people who don't understand any other way but all we can do is try and help them as best we can and try to help them. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 6/21/2010 1:52:00 PM
mental illness sure can be a struggle, hang in there and things will get better!
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jonathon. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:20:00 AM
I fully concur as an undiagnosed self medicated bi-polar- depressive- that is my average day rattled out- Congrats on being featured here
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