Ralph Sergi Poet Free verse

The Thought of You

The Thought  of You

Alone in her room she poses to stare
In her spherical mirror devoid of all clothes
Her lithe body strides over to pick up her dress
And drapes it against her admiring his gift
Her disheveled hair emblazoned in rows
A tendriled tiara , a queen de la vie
Unassumed beauty and a pert smile to charm 
Eyelashes that flutter revealing her eyes
Of hazel that glow and blend with her hair  
Her transparent dress embedded in foils
That glow from within when her heart rate will rise
He has been blessed with the love of his life
She entered his sun and his joy shineth bright

She Sits Alone Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper
August 6, 2017

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Pandita Sietesantos August 17, 2017 at 2:01 PM What a beautiful, romantic piece with awesome imagery and flawless flow! It is so deserving to be on the winners list! Congrats, my friend! Love it! Pandita

Susan Ashley August 13, 2017 at 8:38 PM Hi Ralph, passionate romance. I enjoyed your poem thoroughly. Congratulations on your win!

Heidi Sands August 13, 2017 at 6:10 PM Congratulations Ralph :)

Eve Roper August 13, 2017 at 6:05 PM Thank you for entering my contest, Ralph. You have written a very romantic and passionate poem, I enjoyed. Congratulations on your win. ~* Ralph Sergi August 13, 2017 at 6:19 PM Hi Eve: Thank you for considering me!

Arthur Vaso August 13, 2017 at 12:45 PM Very romantic and evocative write, great poem! Ralph Sergi August 13, 2017 at 6:24 PM Thank you, Arthur.

Charlie Smith August 10, 2017 at 3:04 PM Romancing the romantic, excellent entry Ralph, best wishes...

Probir Gupta August 9, 2017 at 8:30 PM How beautifully you discover her passion and versified it ... Enjoyed the images ... Btw, thanks for liking my Quintain ...

Curtis Johnson August 9, 2017 at 7:13 PM Thanks for your comment Ralph. It's not personal. I wrote it for the 'Fallen Angel' contest. 'She sits Alone-great read and best wishes in the contest. Ralph Sergi August 9, 2017 at 7:37 PM Thanks, Curtis, I'm relieved and good luck in the contest.

Ralph Sergi August 9, 2017 at 2:35 PM Thank you, Jo: her painting really inspired me.

Joanna Daniel August 9, 2017 at 9:05 AM A unique take on the theme, Ralph..

Janice Canerdy August 8, 2017 at 11:13 PM Very descriptive and appealing, Ralph! Janice Ralph Sergi August 9, 2017 at 2:38 PM Thank you, Janice: Having been in the art field, I was inspired buy her admirable painting.

Akkina Downing August 8, 2017 at 5:31 PM Very lovely! And good luck in the contest Ralph :) Ralph Sergi August 9, 2017 at 2:43 PM Thank you for your good wishes, Akkina. I love your name.

Nette Onclaud August 8, 2017 at 1:14 PM imbued with elegant lines.. a poetic moment to behold, ralph.. huggs Ralph Sergi August 8, 2017 at 4:53 PM Thank you, nette; What a nice thing to say!

Ralph Sergi August 8, 2017 at 9:56 AM Hi ML: Thank you for sharing my post.

M. L. Kiser August 8, 2017 at 5:05 AM Lovely, great imagery, I can almost see her. Ralph Sergi August 8, 2017 at 9:57 AM Hi ML: Thank you for your comment.

Agnes Krampe August 7, 2017 at 6:28 PM Well done - I love to see the different interpretations everybody comes up with for the contest. Good luck! Ralph Sergi August 7, 2017 at 8:57 PM Thank you, Agnes. I should have called it Transparent Dress (ha ha)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 7, 2017 at 4:54 PM Creative and romantic writing that mirrors a sensitive soul dear, Ralph! Good luck my friend! Ralph Sergi August 7, 2017 at 8:58 PM You are never too old to appreciate young beauty.

Vijay Pandit August 7, 2017 at 2:52 PM Good imagination Ralph-- best wishes for the contest.

Patricia Cresswell August 7, 2017 at 2:40 PM It is a dream scape soft and passionate.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2017 at 4:36 AM - Very well done, Ralph - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ralph Sergi August 7, 2017 at 12:31 PM Thank you ,my nice Norse friend.

Joseph May August 6, 2017 at 9:54 PM Well written Ralph...Great last line... Ralph Sergi August 7, 2017 at 1:01 PM Thank you, Joseph

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2017 at 8:09 PM wow, Ralph, you have done an amazing job with this theme. I am a bit jealous. I have no idea where to take this one!! Sure to be a win! Ralph Sergi August 7, 2017 at 12:30 PM Hi Andrea: Thank you. I read about transparent dresses and I had to place it in a poem.

Ralph Sergi August 6, 2017 at 9:26 AM Hi Victor: I'm pass the point of sensuality and I see the poem in a poetic light. It is really an expression of youth ,beauty inspired by the painting and of course she is alone.