The Thought of You

His eyes are pools of autumn fire
An intense gaze, of which I never tire.
To drown in their depths a pleasant death
He comes in closer, I loose my breath.
Our pulses quicken, skin tingles, a live wire.


The touch of his hand upon my skin
As he looks into my eyes, my thoughts are a sin.
Taking me into his strong arms, he holds me
Even in his tight embrace, I feel so free.
The beat of his heart, is my hearts twin.


His breathy voice, whispered into my ear
The sound of it excites me, brings me near.
The thoughts in my head, vivid imagination
The feelings for him a strong fascination.
To loose him now is my only fear.


The future is an unknown mystery
Will I always be alone, will he come to me?
With him close to my side I will be complete 
The sight of him, his touch, will be so sweet.
Whatever he wants, whatever he needs...I will be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/17/2008 5:39:00 PM
This is expressed in a very descriptive way, explaining your love to this man. Very well written. Steven
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Kimberly Taylor
Date: 8/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
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Date: 9/2/2008 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations Kimberly on this love poem "The Thought of You" being featured. Vince
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Kimberly Taylor
Date: 8/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
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Date: 9/1/2008 6:35:00 PM
Kimberly - what a honestly splendid way to write out the emotions of love - just simply a wonderful poem - Congrats on the feature and God Bless
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Kimberly Taylor
Date: 8/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
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Date: 8/31/2008 9:12:00 PM
Intersting reflection on love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2008 6:48:00 PM
Sounds like you are hooked! Awesome write! Congratulations Kimberly on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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