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The Thorns of Prior

Due depart and so, desire The rose does not befit the choir

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 4/30/2025 3:36:00 AM
So poignant and restrained. The longing is potent in the brevity present here. Well-written, Devin. Be Blessed always, Hiba :)
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Devin Croteau
Date: 4/30/2025 7:33:00 AM
I have an appreciation for poetry that is short but elicits the emotion of far more words. I thank you :) that was my hope for this piece.

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