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The Thorn

` Finding the thorn on the stem slowly bleeding, draining the life from the flower above Sharp as a tack and as deadly as poison, taking the breath from this moment of love Growing alone on the garden path weeping, death and decay climb the arbor of fear Bramble and thicket collect in the corners, nary a bloom or a petal is near Brown, now the color that takes the advantage, loneliness forms in the shadows you see Stay farther back from your found expectations before you learn that this thorn, it is me 7/10/20 Written for the: The Flower, The Thorn or Both Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/15/2020 10:58:00 AM
I can somehow feel pain ,loneliness and sadness in this.The bleeding...the thorn...Yes we are the thorn as any human can be sometimes..but am sure that for each thorn that is you there are a hundred petals blooming cheering those around you. Expectations can make are hearts sour..but on the otherhand expectations make us dream big..And beautiful are dreams ..especially when you write them down for us to read. Keep Well Chris.Am glad to be here reading your poems again.
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Date: 8/25/2020 1:36:00 AM
Woo, my imagery was going there, a tale of loneliness and forsakenness, but; no, in the end, we end up with the darker side of you roaming the around the garden footpath, strong stuff, Chris
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Date: 8/4/2020 3:52:00 PM
WoW Chris! This is a winner for sure. Loved this from beginning to end. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/24/2020 10:43:00 PM
Brilliant, missing your poetry, Chris:)
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Date: 7/11/2020 4:44:00 PM
Excellent poetry, Chris! So brilliant! :)
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Date: 7/11/2020 3:45:00 AM
Perfect prickly write...gardening gloves and coveralls are advised :)
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Date: 7/10/2020 7:12:00 PM
i've been missing your poetry, chris, and this is a perfect example of why. wow! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 7/10/2020 2:19:00 PM
Woah. When you do dark... I'm struggling here for words ;), Crazy good poem Chris. A winner for me, my best to you. xomo
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Date: 7/10/2020 11:32:00 AM
Hello, Chris. How tragic to think that because of a thorn a bloom was left alone to wither and die. What a metaphor, indicative of being afraid to love. There are times when a warning given is taken as a challenge.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2020 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Jenna. I just popped in this morning, haven't been here in a while and saw the contest and was intrigued and this is what came to mind. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 7/10/2020 9:58:00 AM
A great poem for the contest Chris! Well written :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2020 10:10:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend.

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