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Clowns cackle at the purple plume the global order is so unsteady. Others only see coming doom yet most think it's too late already. Two bombs were dropped on Japan humans always take things too far - laughing at acts one can't explain denying what fools they truly are. People are swayed by illusions heard howling at a crescent moon, fear drives them to false conclusions all too often and all too soon. Who knows when the third bomb will fall testing the odds against world war? Certainly it would end us all - we want clear heads to do much more. Up To 20 Lines Contest 5/1/23 Sotto Sponsor 100 words 16 lines rhyme Illustration by G. Gaul

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Date: 6/3/2023 9:45:00 PM
It's scary of what people think they have the power to do. Deep write. Soup mail my friend
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/10/2023 1:05:00 PM
Eve, I appreciate your poetic sensibilities.
Date: 6/1/2023 3:04:00 AM
We live in scary times Greg. To quote the title of a film from 1970: "Suppose They Gave A War And Nobody Came" Cheers - Gary
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/10/2023 1:03:00 PM
You are so right my friend. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/3/2023 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write/picture. Have a blessed day..................
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/5/2023 7:12:00 AM
Kaboom! Your kindness overflows. Thank you.
Date: 5/3/2023 10:15:00 AM
- I agree ... it will definitely end us all - A little push on the button ... poof !!! ... the end - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Greg :) -
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/5/2023 7:13:00 AM
Lots to ponder, no doubt. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 5/2/2023 9:21:00 PM
Congratulations on crafting such a lovely poem that combines the elegance of poetry with the wisdom of thought.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/5/2023 7:34:00 AM
Thanks ever so for your thoughtful hosting. Most appreciated.

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