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Up To 20 Lines Contest
5/1/23 
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100 words  16 lines  rhyme
Illustration by G. Gaul

The Third Bomb

Clowns cackle at the purple plume
the global order is so unsteady.
Others only see coming doom
yet most think it's too late already.

Two bombs were dropped on Japan
humans always take things too far -
laughing at acts one can't explain
denying what fools they truly are.

People are swayed by illusions
heard howling at a crescent moon,
fear drives them to false conclusions
all too often and all too soon.

Who knows when the third bomb will fall
testing the odds against world war?
Certainly it would end us all -
we want clear heads to do much more.
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Roper Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 9:45 PM
It's scary of what people think they have the power to do. Deep write. Soup mail my friend
Gaul Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 1:05 PM
Eve, I appreciate your poetic sensibilities.
Radice Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 3:04 AM
We live in scary times Greg. To quote the title of a film from 1970: "Suppose They Gave A War And Nobody Came" Cheers - Gary
Gaul Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 1:03 PM
You are so right my friend. Thanks for commenting.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write/picture. Have a blessed day..................
Gaul Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 7:12 AM
Kaboom! Your kindness overflows. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 10:15 AM
- I agree ... it will definitely end us all - A little push on the button ... poof !!! ... the end - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Greg :) -
Gaul Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Lots to ponder, no doubt. Thank you for your comment.
Poet Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 9:21 PM
Congratulations on crafting such a lovely poem that combines the elegance of poetry with the wisdom of thought.
Gaul Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Thanks ever so for your thoughtful hosting. Most appreciated.
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