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The Thing You Seek

For the thing you seek, Aou must take a peek, At the shelf, With a elf, You better get going, Or it's going to start snowing!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/17/2024 12:52:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/8/2016 1:15:00 PM

JACKY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2014 6:28:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jacky - I choose your first nice written poem - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)