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The Tenth Month

The tenth month 


October has psychological problem as it doesn´t 
belongs anywhere, nor summer or winter? That 
is why it gets hot at noon and cold in the evening 
having read bad reviews all day long,
 October has an inferiority complex doesn´t accept 
critics, sees it as a personal attack and then it gets 
resentful send bucket full of rains on foe and friends 
alike. But October has a soft inner heart, sentimental 
too, so speak softly to it and it will be your friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/20/2012 6:43:00 AM
Oct'o'ber has an opal right in the middle of its name to redeem itself.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 10/20/2012 1:26:00 PM
and here I´m whipping myself and not seeing the opal

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