The Ten Daggers

The  Daggers  
by Stina Lu

I spent  thousands of years
burning my flesh
Casting, hardening, forging ...
The daggers

Put one of them
on the summit of the Olympus
The holy gods feared 
and disappeared 

Pierced one in the long and narrow island 
on the margin of the Pacific Ocean
It arrogated the grace of the sun
Killing and looting in the name of its glory 

One was stabbed  
into the heart of the main land
Black blood erupted  and flew
breeding dizzy modern civilization

One flied  into the vast  heaven
My footsteps clopping heavily 
Make the moon and stars 
trembling all day and night

Two were inserted 
to  the  north and south frozen pole
The bears and emperor penguins
drifted all around with no home

The other daggers 
were used to cut the river of history 
Smash the memories into tiny pieces 
Forget all the evil things I have done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/2/2017 3:15:00 PM
Well written Stina..
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Stina Lu
Date: 12/2/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thanks a lot
Date: 12/2/2017 12:55:00 PM
This hints at global warming and man's affect on mother earth. Lovely.
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Stina Lu
Date: 12/2/2017 6:51:00 PM
Yes. That's right. Thanks for your comments
Date: 11/23/2017 7:18:00 AM
Eyes appeared like darts and daggers, Anyone who has seen them staggers; Picture did draw, Of face I saw; Enjoys being women who are naggers.
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James Horn
Date: 11/23/2017 11:17:00 AM
And also stragglers as well as lagers catch baseballs and are shaggers.
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James Horn
Date: 11/23/2017 11:17:00 AM
And also stragglers as well as lagers catch baseballs and are shaggers.
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Stina Lu
Date: 11/23/2017 7:52:00 AM
Men are staggers Women are naggers They love and hurt each other with darts and daggers
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