The Ten and Under Lane

Eleven items in a ten and under lane This act and murder are exactly the same Suffocated to death Till no more breath Deserved for trying to get ahead of the game
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Put back one Hoho you don't need two...ten or eleven it's still only a few...give Rita a wink...it'll get her to think...and before she notices she'd check out you : )
Ellison Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Great advice... a wink and a tickle!!!!
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