Ralph Taylor Poet Limerick

The Tee Shot

Standing on the tee, driver in hand.

Deciding where, my ball needs to land!

      Once the ball's in flight,

      if I've hit it right,

it will end up, quite near, where I planned!


3/22/13

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Rachel W August 22, 2013 at 9:53 AM It never seems to end up where I plan! LOL Good one :) Cheers, Rach

Donna Jones April 12, 2013 at 7:13 PM Congratulations Ralph

Poet Destroyer A April 11, 2013 at 11:07 AM Ralph, stopping by to read your winning poem in Craig's golfing limerick. Congratulations with your fun swing ;-) Always & Forever*PD

Isaiah Zerbst April 10, 2013 at 10:15 AM Good limerick. Got a chuckle out of it!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 10, 2013 at 6:03 AM lets hope... congratulations Ralph xx

Abdulhafeez Oyewole April 9, 2013 at 4:22 PM Congrats on your win Ralph~A.O

Francine Roberts April 9, 2013 at 2:43 PM if only... congrats on your win Ralph with this optimistic entry

Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2013 at 3:38 PM This is VERY nice one. A quick suggestion. The last line is ten syllables. You could substitute very for the word Quite! Luv, Andrea Ralph Taylor March 25, 2013 at 4:16 PM Thanks, Andrea. Appreciate the help. Made your recommended change. hugs, Ralph

Funom Makama March 23, 2013 at 10:16 AM beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!