The Tease

Leave trails of light for me to follow
Through your dark, elusive game.
Let them flicker past the hollows
Like aurora's harmless flames.
Take advantage of my blindness,
Lead me to that empty room.
Don that mask of chiselled kindness,
Let the growing blaze consume
Every thought I've ever pondered,
Every hope I've entertained.
And don't you dare neglect to squander
Every virtue I've maintained.
Splash fragrant fuel against the walls,
Let it spill across the floor.
Light the match before it falls.
Don't forget to shut the door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 15, 2013 at 9:28 PM
Heather, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD
Puddifoot Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 2:41 PM
congrats on your winning fave poem, superb imagery and phrasing, I remember being impressed with your work before...it's strange how many excellent poets on this site are canadian! whatever is in the water, I want it bottled and sent across the pond lol
Oyewole Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 1:55 PM
Congrts on your win Heather.
Hunter Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Congrats, Heather! For some reason, I was thinking this was the one about the dress(which I really like too)...haha. I remember it now, though....its great!
Ober Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 12:45 PM
Haha I can understand why - the girl wearing that dress in my poem was quite the tease! ;)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 11:41 PM
An awesome write Heather! Your rhyme is seamless in this little gem. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Congrats, loved your poem wow...Terry xoxo a 7<<<<
Hendricks Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Wow!! No wonder you won this contest. Explosive poetry. Congratulations on winning, Heather :)
Johnson Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Outstanding and emotional. I can see this winning varied contests. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 3:07 PM
Fearful! wow! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Sister Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 1:30 PM
Wow what an image here, so neat. J
Gasun Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 11:30 AM
This is really great! I love this so much, too! Big warm congratulations on your grand win my dear friend Heather. Thank you so much for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora
Delaney Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:59 AM
Heather: A wonderful poem and now will be one of my favs. Congratulations and thanks to Andrea for bringing these poems to one easy place to be read, SuZ
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:32 AM
many congratulations on your double win , first as a fave and now this xx
Bauer Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:00 AM
mysterious and intriguing! congrats on your win!
Hunter Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:26 AM
I agree with Andrea. Your imagery is always great!...you are a wordsmith.
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 12:05 AM
gosh I was able to find one right away that I had not seen before!! now Heather, it is YOU who are the master of imagery. I just adore your style. And this one gets a fave from ME. by the way, I don't think my wind poem was so popular with people so I really appreciate that you liked it so much.
Dorr Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Its rhymes well but is elusive so requiring more than one read like most good poetry.
Ober Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Thank you, Peter!
Wesley Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 3:02 PM
Wonderful poetry Heather, you manage to send the message with such intricate wording. Nothing blatant, but it captures and draws me in with wonderful imagery. Super great! :)
Ober Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 2:32 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment!
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 2:32 PM
Nicely written Heather, love it. Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your comments are always so sweet!
Madonsela Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 2:11 PM
i found my heart racing from line to line yo kept me captivated. RONNY.
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:02 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, Ronny! :)
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 12:17 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I will be back Monday to read some more. Wishing you a weekend full of love and joy and much much inspiration in your writing endeavors Heather. Love, Carol
Ober Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Thank you, Carol! I hope you have a wonderful weekend too :)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 4:06 PM
Wow..very nice write here.!!!
Ober Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Thank you for your kind comments :)
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