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The Teardrop Poem

A poem is just a teardrop
A form of liquid pain
Released to pen and paper
Our words become a stain

The hurt that's bottled up inside
Can come out through our eyes
Promises made, but never kept
Are nothing but liquid lies

As the teardrop hits the paper
The words begin to form
Releasing all the pain inside
To calm the coming storm

Heartache is just another word
That's written by our tears
The pain becomes the writer's quill
'Til a little relief appears

A poem is just a teardrop
That's worded carefully
Liquid pain becomes a stain
And sets the poet free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/24/2010 7:45:00 AM
Brought tears to mine! Wonderful write. I'm always amazed by your talent.
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Date: 10/18/2010 4:06:00 PM
Got that right...I release so painful stuff onto the paper for sure....Sara
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Date: 10/18/2010 11:11:00 AM
Beautiful, Larry. Very descriptive. Delightful. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/18/2010 11:07:00 AM
So very true your words here are Larry..just beautiful..take care~Deb
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Date: 10/18/2010 10:47:00 AM
Surely, you have worded this poem carefully as a teardrop , larry
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Date: 10/18/2010 9:00:00 AM
BRAVO Larry this is indeed very well written and so unique as well luv.. enjoyed your word flow and lines so true ..luv.. great way to begin the week...
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Date: 10/18/2010 8:30:00 AM
this is such a gem, Larry-- loved how it flowed, loved what it says even more-- adding this to my faves as well! such a perfect read for me this rainy evening (& I am trying to write a poem but no dice)--I guess my teardrops have run out...nikko :)
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Date: 10/18/2010 8:14:00 AM
A wnderful little poem..I was hooked after the first stanza. To my favs..BG
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Date: 10/18/2010 7:41:00 AM
wonderfully penned, I love it
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