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The Teardrop Lied

The teardrop lied Mocked the moment Seized its opportunity To defy the honor of sadness. ©6/17/2023

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Date: 6/19/2023 7:24:00 PM
Bravo! A FAVE! Magnifico! Love it immensely! Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 6/17/2023 10:58:00 PM
No idea why but I imagined the teardrop as a soldier getting a dishonourable discharge from the army. Poor fellow :'(
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John Lawless
Date: 6/18/2023 4:59:00 AM
VIOLA!! I hoped this would "shake the tree" and spur insight into the unknown depth of a tear.

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