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INSPIRED BY the movie “JEAN DE FLORETTE”

The Taste of Bitterness

He was a bitter aging man
He’d never married
Had lost the love of his life
And never recovered
She had died before his return from war
Her parents’ home still stood there like a castle 
He often gazed at it from his window

After their final family funeral
He became incensed when he heard
Some city slicker was moving into her house
And when that day did come, he took to spying on him
Cursing him, venomous and vicious
Vindictive and spiteful, inflamed with jealousy
Maliciously sinning by mischief and omission

Finally the bitter aging man did win
And the village prepared for another funeral 
All his conniving had paid off
It was shortly after
That the tragedy was discovered
The two lovers had been separated by a letter
Lost and never delivered
Florette announcing her condition
Did not receive a reply
Had moved away in shame
And died on her own giving birth



AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nusker Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 11:57 PM
This poetic tale has all the twists and turns. Love it.
Gauthier Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 11:00 AM
I highly recommend the movie. Let me know if you get to see it.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 10:18 PM
Such a sad epic tale. What a pen! Good luck in the contest :) xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Hi Maureen, it's only the tip of the iceberg. I highly recommend the movie. Let me know if you ever see it. And thanks for the compliment. Line xx
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