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INSPIRED BY the movie “JEAN DE FLORETTE”

He was a bitter aging man He’d never married Had lost the love of his life And never recovered She had died before his return from war Her parents’ home still stood there like a castle He often gazed at it from his window After their final family funeral He became incensed when he heard Some city slicker was moving into her house And when that day did come, he took to spying on him Cursing him, venomous and vicious Vindictive and spiteful, inflamed with jealousy Maliciously sinning by mischief and omission Finally the bitter aging man did win And the village prepared for another funeral All his conniving had paid off It was shortly after That the tragedy was discovered The two lovers had been separated by a letter Lost and never delivered Florette announcing her condition Did not receive a reply Had moved away in shame And died on her own giving birth Submitted on January 8, 2023 for contest 2022 MARATHON MILE 24 sponsored by MARK TONEY and October 27, 2017 for contest STANDARD No.45 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 10/28/2017 11:57:00 PM
This poetic tale has all the twists and turns. Love it.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/29/2017 11:00:00 AM
I highly recommend the movie. Let me know if you get to see it.
Date: 10/27/2017 10:18:00 PM
Such a sad epic tale. What a pen! Good luck in the contest :) xomo!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2017 10:34:00 AM
Hi Maureen, it's only the tip of the iceberg. I highly recommend the movie. Let me know if you ever see it. And thanks for the compliment. Line xx

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