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The Talk of the Woods

babbling brook is heard
trees whisper in the soft breeze
birds singing in glee

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 1/1/2010 8:19:00 PM

a wonderful haiku describing such a peaceful and enriching place,,Thank you for taking the time to read and comment upon my words,,Blessings..Cecil

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/20/2009 1:47:00 PM

sweet space..nice place Light & Love

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/9/2009 7:13:00 PM

you are very talented! Brandee!... jim

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/25/2009 4:54:00 AM

Wonderful imagery in this haiku--it's almost as if I were in the woods as well :) thanks Brandee btw for liking my poem, appreciate it very much :) keep writing!

James Fraser

Date: 9/11/2009 3:02:00 PM

Awesome images in this lovely Haiku Brandee>>James

Date: 9/10/2009 1:40:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration--a pleasure to read again. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/9/2009 5:10:00 AM

Brandy, Thank you for sharing your delightful words in this beautiful haiku. The image created is wonderful. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/5/2009 10:32:00 AM

Brandee a wonderfully beautiful haiku that is sure to be a winner - God Bless, mj

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/4/2009 9:37:00 AM

agree a nice entry for rauls contest I finished mine too but its not as lovely thanks for sharign and for your kind comments blessings to you and family

Date: 9/2/2009 1:54:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and personification for a creative view. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2009 5:44:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Brandee. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/2/2009 5:42:00 AM

beautiful imagery in this one could here the melcholny by birdies too thanks for sharign and for your kind comments to my boo keep up the nice writing

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 9/2/2009 2:31:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku, very visual indeed. Thank you for your positive comments, enjoyed them. Regards: Déirde Ó Maidín

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/1/2009 10:20:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/1/2009 6:00:00 PM

Perfect haiku, and I can see it matches the vision in the photograph!! Best of luck with this lovely piece! ~ Carrie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/1/2009 3:16:00 PM

Reading you haiku, today has been a pleasure. I can almost smell the fresh air in the breeze. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann