The Tale of Billy Bob Bunny Part 2

Life in a pen was not easy
Bunny Bob soon became crazy
how to hop again
in lush green garden
so he planned escape strategy.

One night he found the door open
silently came out of the pen
crossed over the fence
made a little dance
started eating carrots again.

When mama woke up at sunrise
Bob was at bed,what a surprise
sleeping beside her
was her little star
how could Bunny become so wise?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/28/2012 4:02:00 PM
This is adorable. Ever thought of writing children's books? May a smile land on your face and refuse to leave. Huggs TLee
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Date: 3/5/2012 3:31:00 AM
very good to her surprise, bunny back with mama wise, good stuff mate...
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Date: 2/29/2012 4:25:00 AM
I do too have dimples and so does my mother...part Indian, silly!! Hey, this is the cutest darn limerick trio, Kash! You do children's poetry so well and the reference to her lil star was my fav image! Very smooth write...and imaginative too! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:22:00 PM
Revisiting the bunny poem!! well, Kashinath, much as I love all those REAL foods, I don't eat them all at once. hahaha. and I usually don't have too many of them during the week. You probably cannot imagine how much I was able to eat when I was very young!
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Date: 2/28/2012 10:33:00 AM
real cute this is Kash, enjoyed. harry
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Date: 2/28/2012 12:58:00 AM
no wonder you were out for a while, kashi biddy... what a dreamy piece with lots of warm sentiments.. whooo, i love this, great storyteller!... to the winners' circle wth hugggs.. come visit! :)
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Date: 2/27/2012 8:33:00 PM
ahhhhh, so sweet. But maybe I did not want him to escape. heehee. I was gonna put a moral on the end of my tale: The moral is, somtimes it is better to be fat and happy than to be free (but I didn't want to get too many people upset with my socialistic slant to the story!) Luv, Andrea (you did a GREAT job with this, Kash)
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Date: 2/27/2012 12:14:00 PM
LOL, great fun write, Kash. Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 2/27/2012 11:21:00 AM
This is a fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read this afternoon Kash! I love how you told the story of the bunny, from being crazy to being next to mama, it's all a wonderful story! Thank you for sharing this story with all of us! Great Work!
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