The Take Over

Painting #10
Thistle in a Field, by Fidelia Bridges  1875


Wild and free, 
the thistle in a field 
sharpens its spine, 
stretches its long neck 
to kiss the sun.

He is a runaway 
this out of control 
prodigal son 
absorbing the heat 
on a hot summer’s day 
racing to see 
who has out grown him 
in the shortest time 
during the siege   
and take over. 

He enjoys 
his freedom 
wildly predicting 
his an end time 
when he, with all 
the others 
will be cut down.

He is one thistle in a field 
calling for unity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Guzzi Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 1:04 PM
You made it to 10 congrad's Danetta! Light & Love
May Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Great write Danetta...I like your interpretation of the painting...best wishes
Barney Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Thanks Joseph. :)
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