The Swords Speak - Assassins Brotherhood

The Swords Speak – Assasins Brotherhood

Legend says
That a killers brotherhood existed
During high Middle Ages
Fighting for people’s freedom

They were called assassins
They were persecuted and killed
They had a motto to fight for
“Nothing is true -
Everything is permitted”

Their swords speak of freedom
They had it Inscribed on their blades
“We work in the dark to serve the light,
We are assassins” or so it’s said

Their lives were for the cause
Their blood not their own
They were disposable to the society
Not considered one of their own

But the brotherhood of the assassins
Were fighting a war for peace
Their aim, assure freedom
The Templars, their nemesis

But as I said, that’s a myth
In the history, It’s just a legend
The Templars became the heroes
The Assassins were just erased

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January 15, 2017

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9th Place in the Contest The Swords Speak
Sponsored by: Julia Ward
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Roberts Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 10:33 PM
Congratulations Claudia...somewhat on the same frequency of my first stanza ;)
Polydoro Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 4:50 AM
Hi Donna!!! You're right! :) - Thanks xoxoxo
May Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 1:44 PM
Congrats on your win Claudia
Polydoro Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 5:10 PM
Thanks a lot, Joseph! :)
Ward Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 3:09 AM
An interesting piece of history was contained within your poem, a worthy winner. Congratulations!
Ward Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 3:58 AM
Thank you for delving into history for your poem. :)
Polydoro Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Thanks a lot, Julia... I really appreciate you chosing my poem in your top 10 list. I'm really happy with my placement - Hugs :)
Muzzey Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:48 PM
A very nice take on the sword legend, best to you in the contest. I enjoyed the read! Caryl
Polydoro Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 7:50 PM
Thanks a lot Caryl, I'm happy you liked :) Hugs!!
Burch Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 12:53 AM
Claudia...I like where you went with this...no myth here...like your touch with research you've added...well done and best wishes for the contest!! Big Hugggs. ;) deb
Polydoro Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 4:36 AM
Thank you Deborah!! I liked how it turned out too... I'm happy you liked it - Hugs back :*
White Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 1:28 PM
Good luck in the contest my dear friend! I learned a lot through your poem.
Polydoro Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Thanks Darren! It was interesting finding out the origin of it! Hugs my sweet friend :*
Smith Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Very informative and interesting...I'm going to have to read up on them now.
Polydoro Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 7:22 PM
Yes! It is interesting... myth based in real facts :)
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