The Swords Speak

Back in the eighteenth century, the swords of the Polish Legion Supporting Lombardy were inscribed with an Italian phrase, translated as Free people are brothers  We defend ourselves righteously. And thus, free people are brothers. Whether we fight on land or sea, We defend ourselves righteously. God, therefore, our support will be From the tyranny of others. We defend ourselves righteously. And thus, free people are brothers. Jan. 31, 2017 for the Contest of Julia Ward

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Date: 2/5/2017 12:10:00 PM
Well done! This is one contest I did get to post for. I enjoyed your triolet, it's contents are right on and the form serves each point well. This should soar! Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 2/4/2017 3:30:00 PM
It is a shame people must take up arms to fight for freedom. Look at how many wars Americans have fought - not just the Revolution or the Civil War. Still, I admire the camaraderie of the soldiers in your beautifully written poem. (My mother's family was Polish, so I appreciated the historical note at the top too. Best wishes in the contest, Andrea. I couldn't come up with anything. You nailed it!
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Date: 2/4/2017 1:35:00 PM
This poem reminds me of how the 18th century people would have written. I love this.
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Date: 2/3/2017 9:51:00 PM
Well done, Andrea--a 7! Janice
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Date: 2/3/2017 11:06:00 AM
GREAT POEMS X GLAD X
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Date: 2/2/2017 8:14:00 PM
Great poem, Andrea, good luck in this contest. Hugs
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Date: 2/2/2017 11:29:00 AM
Hi Andrea: A vert=y inspirational poem. goodluck!
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Date: 2/2/2017 11:30:00 AM
Hi Andrea: A very inspirational poem, good luck!
Date: 2/1/2017 3:56:00 AM
- Performed with skill, Andrea - Love final line - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:50:00 AM
I am not my brother's keeper, I am my brother! Very impressive, Andrea. Really well done!
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Date: 1/31/2017 9:56:00 PM
Nice use of form in this one. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/31/2017 9:50:00 PM
Great one for the contest Andrea... Reads like a winner...loved this triolet form... You did very well... A big 7...
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Date: 1/31/2017 9:22:00 PM
Well done Andrea, you Triolet teaser you
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Date: 1/31/2017 8:25:00 PM
Very nice Andrea, liked how you did this!
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