The Sword of the Lord

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A tooth for a tooth
An eye for an eye
If by the sword you live,
you will die and never ask why.
Your sword in your hand is your truth. 

Vengeance is mine
and I will repay 
Hark, the (s)word of the Lord.
Count on it, there's payday, someday. 
Think! Why the absence of a time line? 


December 1, 2019
IP-025

contest:  If you live by the sword, then you die by the sword
host:  Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Messina Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 5:30 PM
Well done, Reason. Congratulations on your win. Charlie
Poteet Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:18 AM
I thank you, Charles. It was a fun write and of course, the placement gives it value in at least one person's estimation. I appreciate your comment.
Carmack Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:36 PM
Mrs Poteet, nice with the '(s)word'. Took me right to Hebrews 4:12 { For the word of God is quick, and powerful, and sharper than any twoedged sword, piercing even to the dividing asunder of soul and spirit, and of the joints and marrow, and is a discerner of the thoughts and intents of the heart.
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December 17, 2019 at 5:16 AM
THanks for commenting, Rob. That verse has always mystified me, the soul and the spirit being divided. The joints and marrow, at least I understand, and I can see a vague separation of thoughts and intents. But to split the soul and spirit; God's (s)word is like Him, beyond comprehension.
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Reason, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Poteet Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:12 AM
thanks, Eve, and Merry Christmas to a fellow poet.
Na Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Well done on getting a winning poem :)~ Reason
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December 17, 2019 at 5:12 AM
thanks, Gregory, I was happy with it, the poem and the placement.
One Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Poteet Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:11 AM
thanks, SO, I appreciate your judgment in this case and welcome 3rd placement.
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