The Sword of the Lord

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A tooth for a tooth
An eye for an eye
If by the sword you live,
you will die and never ask why.
Your sword in your hand is your truth. 

Vengeance is mine
and I will repay 
Hark, the (s)word of the Lord.
Count on it, there's payday, someday. 
Think! Why the absence of a time line? 


December 1, 2019
IP-025

contest:  If you live by the sword, then you die by the sword
host:  Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 12/16/2019 5:30:00 PM
Well done, Reason. Congratulations on your win. Charlie
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 12/17/2019 5:18:00 AM
I thank you, Charles. It was a fun write and of course, the placement gives it value in at least one person's estimation. I appreciate your comment.
Date: 12/15/2019 8:36:00 PM
Mrs Poteet, nice with the '(s)word'. Took me right to Hebrews 4:12 { For the word of God is quick, and powerful, and sharper than any twoedged sword, piercing even to the dividing asunder of soul and spirit, and of the joints and marrow, and is a discerner of the thoughts and intents of the heart.
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Date: 12/17/2019 5:16:00 AM
THanks for commenting, Rob. That verse has always mystified me, the soul and the spirit being divided. The joints and marrow, at least I understand, and I can see a vague separation of thoughts and intents. But to split the soul and spirit; God's (s)word is like Him, beyond comprehension.
Date: 12/15/2019 7:29:00 PM
Reason, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 12/17/2019 5:12:00 AM
thanks, Eve, and Merry Christmas to a fellow poet.
Date: 12/15/2019 5:35:00 PM
Well done on getting a winning poem :)~ Reason
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 12/17/2019 5:12:00 AM
thanks, Gregory, I was happy with it, the poem and the placement.
Date: 12/15/2019 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 12/17/2019 5:11:00 AM
thanks, SO, I appreciate your judgment in this case and welcome 3rd placement.
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