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The Swirling Green Storm

The Swirling Green Storm

Sea foam splattered upon his panicked face 
his boat sank and life was torn asunder. 
He had run away, he was a disgrace; 
the storm worsened with a crack of thunder. 

Each new wave tore at his weakening hold 
yet he recovered, now he longed to live. 
Wanting to hold her as he had of old 
to taste sweet love only Kara could give. 

The words formed inside, then out swift they rushed 
Jacob prayed for rescue and a new start. 
God, let me live, let my life not be crushed 
please save me, please enter this aching heart. 

Suddenly, silence, the sea stopped raging 
as he had prayed he would get a new chance. 
He could picture them together aging 
he felt blessed by their renewed romance. 

A ship rescued him,  new life he could see 
with many new paths to embrace with hope. 
All that was needed was his heartfelt plea; 
God's answer given when he could not cope.

Robert J. Lindley, 1-07-2016

Painting number one
Poem number one,  Ekphrasis

http://www.georgiaokeeffe.net/blue-and-green-music.jsp
Blue and Green Music, 1919/1921 by Georgia O'Keeffe

Inspired by-
(After: Blue and Green Music - Georgia O'Keeffe 1921)
Debbie Guzzi's 10 for 10 challenge
Ekphrastic: Writing on Art and Art on Writing  [this site ACCEPTS reprints] http://www.ekphrastic.net/submissions.html

Syllables Per Line:
10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10
Total # Syllables:	200
Total # Lines:	24  (Including empty lines)
Words with (syllables) counted programmatically:	 N/A
Total # Words:	161

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/8/2016 8:39:00 PM
G'day Robert ... to gain that second chance can mean surviving a raging tempest intermingling shame and mistrust - nicely written again Robert - Lindsay
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Date: 1/8/2016 8:26:00 PM
Very powerful , your imagery are very strong , great write my friend , hugs / / :) dalia
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