Aiyah Torres Poet Light Verse

The Sweetest Goodbye

Clock is ticking down 60's to zero,

                               the train is barely seen its hood.

                               A flick of your finger on tip of my nose,

                               Saying a thousands breathed words.

                               I move my feet one step away.--

                               Fasten a tears that want to fall.

                               You turned to me and grip my soul,

                               And share our lips of a tender kiss.

                               I open my eyes and turned to see,

                               I was left hanging on a bliss...

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Trevor Bryant December 17, 2013 at 11:18 AM Nicely done, Aiyah! A goodbye like that would stay in my head for a long time! Thanks for sharing your talent, hope all is well. :) Aiyah Torres December 17, 2013 at 11:52 AM Thank you, Trevor..too glad for your visit ;)) ...take care always..//xoXO_AiyaH :')

Debbie Guzzi December 17, 2013 at 9:25 AM Thank you, a very enjoyable verse for a snowy day! A very lovely write. Light & Love Aiyah Torres December 17, 2013 at 9:34 AM my honor Ms. Debbie :)) thank you for the comment... Have a warm snowy day to you :") huggs_AiyaH // ^_^

Poet Tacito December 17, 2013 at 9:07 AM Almost a bittersweet goodbye, eh? I understand this feeling all too well. Nicely said! Aiyah Torres December 17, 2013 at 9:32 AM hehe...kinda' Dearest Drake..But even bitter can be sweet,,depending on how we mix our emotion with it.. Thanks for dropping by.. :)) lovelots! :*