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(Pema on Turkish Rug, 2023) The Sweet Spot Remarkably, right on the cusp Between the tangible and intangible Sit the old tribal weavings Of the near to far East. I’m sure to many Both there and here This subtle distinction of delicate balance Goes right over their heads. But to others, Surely more than just a few, It goes right to the heart Which is of course the place we all long to be. It’s such a fine line to find Between this and that The known and the mysterious And yet… What else is there worth finding Where else would you rather be Than at the sweet spot Where in and out are one. (5/24/24)

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Date: 5/25/2024 11:41:00 AM
Hello James, your poem beautifully captures the delicate balance between the tangible and intangible. I love how your words eloquently describe that elusive place we all yearn for, where understanding transcends the surface. It’s the profound beauty in finding harmony amidst life’s complexities. Very insightful and touching piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/25/2024 1:37:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful response/comment Daniel. Blessings to you as well! James
Date: 5/25/2024 3:59:00 AM
accurate.
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