The Sweater

The Sweater





To a frigid wind's quiver,
Graces a warm embrace,
Of passion knitted in hot threads,
My sweater hugs his chest,
To a frigid wind's quiver.




Syl- 7/6/8/6/7
Written August 3rd, 2015
© Dr. Upma A. Sharma 
Inspiration- pic no #6
For contest "A prized refrain" by Nette Onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 1:14 PM
- I'm a little late, but better late than never :) - Dr. Upma, congratulations on your 6. place in the contest !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Such a sweet write, Upma! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Dr Upma, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT
Ngoma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:44 PM
Morning Doc...I love your take on the bike image...knucles & faces freeze numb without adequate insulation in the breeze...outstanding & many congrats *******(;heers, Tbang
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:09 PM
gREAT imagery in this one. Congrats on a fine win!
Callus Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 4:23 PM
A home-knitted sweater...to hubby with love! Love your take on this one, Upma! Congratulations!! // paul
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Dropping back with my congrats DrSharma:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 11:05 PM
Upma, very lovely poem and thanks for visiting my gull poem
Nunez Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 3:43 AM
Hello, Dr. Upma. I've been looking at your poem. There is care and love in each thread of both the sweater and the poem. All the best in the contest! hugs!
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 3:26 AM
Oh Dr Sharma - this is SO clever - love your take on the theme - good luck I hope this does really well for you:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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