The Sweat Shop

She slips on her sweatpants then heads towards the door over to the gym to exercise, bodily atonement just so Diner reservations are at eight there is still so much to do before meeting him in her silk red dress and Reveling smile At the makeup counter she chooses a vigorous Opium scent with two dreamy eyes she pays the lady then walks out Unbeknownst,... her sweetheart is perusing the glass case for a diamond ring. He is ready to dive right in for the sake of love A gentleman across from him snaps the velvet case shut son there is a reason why they call it, " The Sweat Shop" He wipes a brow, "I think she's worth it" he says with fieriness then he arrives early to place the ring beneath a damask cloth; Chopin plays on as he gazes in her eyes of tinkling glass he holds out the ring, " Will You Marry Me" he whispers as the world falls away for a moment, for a second, for a day two lovers kiss in a booth that smells like roses and wine. By: Mystic Rose / Feb. 10, 2022 Sponsor Kai Michael Neumann Contest Name The Sweat Shop
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Maverick Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 2:43 PM
I feel like I fell into a pool of honey here Quite the runny type, but at least it's clean And clear, quite a romantic write if do say.'
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 11:25 AM
very nice! Mystic. Very romantic, Sweat but sweet!
Rose  Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Thank you for stopping by Krish
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 2:18 AM
Oh my gosh, so sweet. I loved the imagery of loves sweet anticipation, and preparation. This was almost like a movie clip. I want to read more about this adorable couple! Well done! I love this so much <3
Rose  Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 2:03 PM
tis the season to be romantic B J :)
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