Get Your Premium Membership

The Swashing

the swashing the evening we were declared WORLD’S HOTTEST CAPITAL sarah & i seek relief via a cool walk between jetties — where an impromptu marine superhighway has formed — a never ending people procession 2 & 3 abreast wander the swashing — magical median between sand & sea — adults stroll — kids splash — dogs chase the waves which suck our toes — pulling us toenail by bunion — into pulsing blood — heat particles extracted & dissolved into shadow — salt replaced by crystals of coolth — a strange osmosis — sighs meanwhile a girl in white glides across glass slowswift & graceful soon fading in the gloaming as if she’s a ship sails full of wind the rest of us cannot catch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/9/2024 7:48:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/1/2016 4:27:00 PM
Awesome, Gareth, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Date: 1/31/2016 9:19:00 PM
Great poem, Gareth,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs