The Swashing

the swashing

the evening we were declared 
WORLD’S HOTTEST CAPITAL

sarah & i seek relief via a cool walk 
between jetties — where an impromptu  

marine superhighway has formed 
— a never ending  people procession 

2 & 3 abreast  wander the swashing —
magical median between sand & sea

— adults stroll — kids splash — dogs chase
the waves which suck our toes — pulling us

toenail by bunion — into pulsing blood
— heat particles extracted & dissolved

into shadow — salt replaced by crystals
of coolth — a strange osmosis — sighs


meanwhile  a girl in white  glides across
glass   slowswift  & graceful    soon fading

in the gloaming   as if she’s a ship
sails full of wind    the rest of us 
                                                  cannot catch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 8, 2026 at 7:45 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 1, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Awesome, Gareth, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Great poem, Gareth,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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