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The Swan King -Key To My Heart

(Key To My Heart) 



Dream 
Within 
A dream 
Breathless 
Symphony 
Castle********Of dreams 
Romantic king of Bavaria 
King Ludwig II was that 
Yes was that and more 
Tender hearted tortured soul 
Unforgettable 
His vision unique 
Forever 
A gift 
that keeps 
Giving 
Thru the years 
Misunderstood 
Not mad 
Sleep in 
Peace sweet 
King 




Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp200 
copyright@2011

October,7,2014

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Jerry Bolton Date: 10/7/2014 8:54:00 PM It is good to find out, through your excellent poetry, that there were kings who were not despots, but real people who had a vision which I assume did not men going to war. Enjoyed this . . . Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 10/7/2014 1:33:00 PM Excellent piece. I have Bavarian ancestry...although my family left Bavaria back in the 1400's. Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/7/2014 3:24:00 PM Thank you so much M.L! Thanks for very kind comments and sharing. I lived in Germany for 3 years a long many years ago. Germany in all included Bavaria, the famous Black Forest and all that are just enchantingly beautiful! My older daughter was born in Germany while lived there. Europe is so charming and beautiful. and so so old of course...so much history and castles, and ghosts ;) Hugs! Have a nice day! xxxx D.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/7/2014 1:06:00 PM Dear Dorian, even though I hadn't heard of this kind previously, I wish I had. Tender-hearted, tortured souls are often misunderstood. There are so many artists who fall into this category and it is wonderful to know a king can be blessed with these endearing qualities. Beautifully written! Love, carolyn Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/7/2014 3:16:00 PM Oh Carol my sweet friend thank you so much for your wonderful comments. You're great! Love to you too! ;) xxxxx D.