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The Surge

storm waves amassed
if only I had waited
for the waves to pass
my poetry could have floated 
gently to shore

characterintrospectionphilosophypoetrypoetscinquain

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Sunlite Wanter

January 25, 2019 at 9:29 AM

Just ran across this poem What a wonderful thought!

Carolyn Devonshire

January 7, 2019 at 12:56 PM

This is quite profound, Arthur. The words we write when under severe stress are angrier and less "poetic," I've found. This is a fave for me, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison

January 5, 2019 at 10:24 AM

poetry in motion Art:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael

January 5, 2019 at 8:19 AM

If only...won't be lonely...so hard to be patient...need to lasso my emotions...

Tom Cunningham

January 5, 2019 at 7:48 AM

But such is life we could be waiting forever for calm weather, battle through the storm I say. Tom.

Besma Riabi Dziri

January 5, 2019 at 5:05 AM

Thank God you hadn't waited for "the waves to pass"! .. Your poetry is handling and keeping up with the "storm waves"! An outstanding Cinquain! Keep it up Arthur! A great write, enjoyed the read.. Best regards.. God bless you.

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