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storm waves amassed
if only I had waited
for the waves to pass
my poetry could have floated 
gently to shore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/7/2019 12:56:00 PM
This is quite profound, Arthur. The words we write when under severe stress are angrier and less "poetic," I've found. This is a fave for me, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/5/2019 10:24:00 AM
poetry in motion Art:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/5/2019 8:19:00 AM
If only...won't be lonely...so hard to be patient...need to lasso my emotions...
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Date: 1/5/2019 7:48:00 AM
But such is life we could be waiting forever for calm weather, battle through the storm I say. Tom.
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Date: 1/5/2019 5:05:00 AM
Thank God you hadn't waited for "the waves to pass"! .. Your poetry is handling and keeping up with the "storm waves"! An outstanding Cinquain! Keep it up Arthur! A great write, enjoyed the read.. Best regards.. God bless you.
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