The Surf

The Surf
                               BREAKS HIGH RESTLESS  
Angry
                     VIOLENT WHITECAPS  
People
        still comb for shells
                                  

                                        Around the bend
Then back again

holidaynaturepeoplefree verse

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Jack Horne

September 15, 2012 at 3:16 PM

love this creative piece, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 15, 2012 at 9:04 AM

Very special and well written Sara. (welcome back) Have a lovely weekend. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

September 14, 2012 at 7:40 PM

REally cool how you did this free verse poem. Unique and great imagery.

Russell Sivey

September 14, 2012 at 5:28 PM

What a natural way to write about the waves...and looking for shells! This is a remarkable write my friend, I really enjoyed reading this fine write this evening! It's nice to see you back Sara, we've missed you here! I hope you time away was good and was only what you wanted to do! You have written a fantastic poem here, very nicely done! Great Work!!

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