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The Sunshine Violins

There's a languorous strain of violins, a concert in the park,
In the honeyed warmth of a green day, as bluebirds sing above.
Irregular perfect blooms all round, mellow sun is pouring down,
Music's in the air like a fragrance, as clouds drift softly by,
Like the beautiful and wandering path, of the purple butterfly!
The lustrous sunshine violins, fill the lovely noon with sound,
The musicians' hearts in every note, in the stillness of delight!
A distant laughter can be heard, under sparkling cerulean skies,
As another fervent and breezy day, awaits huge jeweled fireflies!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Leiser Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Your words set such a lovely scene for the musical magic of violins, Evelyn. Love the imagery your poetic pen creates! :)
Buehler Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 10:14 PM
I am so gratified by your kind appreciation, Laura. Thank you very much. :)
Leffanta Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Puts me in mind of twilight time violinists, especially the one with long, blonde hair who accompanies Andrea Bocelli ........
Buehler Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 11:55 AM
Thank you for your thoughts, my friend. :)
Poet Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Excellent and beautiful write Evelyn, your symbolism and imagery were very well expressed. Wonderful poem.
Buehler Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 11:57 AM
Thank you for the fine, complimentary remarks, Lasaad. :D
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 10:36 AM
You transported me to the live musical concert in open park. Great imagery! Felt I was really listening to the music in the park. Wonderful poem!
Buehler Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 11:59 AM
I appreciate your warm remarks, Rama. :)
Alex Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 7:27 AM
Wow. Violine. Great.
Buehler Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 11:57 AM
Thank you, Christuraj.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 1:00 AM
To hear the mellifluous music of the violin as night descends. Hugs
Buehler Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Thank you so much for attending my concert. Hugs
Fenn Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 9:05 PM
This makes me want to go to this park to hear the violins and see all this beauty!
Buehler Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 9:18 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. it delights me that you feel this way. :D
Hankins Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 6:52 PM
Simply beautiful, Evelyn, with stirring images that will hang in my head for a long time. Incredible writing!
Buehler Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 7:17 PM
That is certainly a pleasure to know, Milton. Thank you for the joyful words. :D
Y. Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 6:19 PM
WoW! Evelyn, You've penned a well-written and descriptive write. I think it would be cool to experience a concert outside. Did you go to a concert like you described? I enjoyed the read. I liked it a lot. Well done, my friend:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 7:24 PM
I am so thrilled that you liked this, Alexis. Thank you for the joy of your lovely comment. Although I've been to wonderful concerts in the sun, none were just like this one, which is a happy fantasy. :D
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