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The Sunshine Shining

The sun shining Into a round shape Stain glass hanging On a window pane With pretty shades of colours Shows the shapes seen Of a wise o owel On the shiny floor

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Al Juman

Date: 7/30/2018 9:45:00 PM

When the sunshine makes you happy the world is happy Lovely Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2018 7:13:00 AM

Hello Al Juman, so nice to meet you. Yes the sunshine does make me happy. Have a nice day my friend.

Andrew Battaglino

Date: 7/30/2018 2:43:00 PM

Short and sweet. It's a nice poem to start the day with.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2018 6:19:00 PM

Hello Andrew Battaglino it is so nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope you have a nice evening my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/30/2018 1:31:00 PM

I love the stained glass imagery, Darlene, It really created beautiful thoughts, Just lovely xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2018 7:18:00 AM

Hello Mike thank you fpr the lovely comment.I also lke the stain glass, the way the sun shines upon the colours is so beautiful. Bailey my goddaughter's dog was put down. She had cancer and was in pain. Have a nice day my friend. xxx-oo

Augustus Black

Date: 7/30/2018 2:16:00 AM

A great way to glorify the nature. Absolutely brilliant, the way you've lined up this poem is really appreciable.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2018 7:13:00 AM

Hello Augustus Black, Thank you for the lovely comment. It ws fun to do Have a nice day my friend.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/29/2018 8:08:00 AM

Lovely. It reminds me large set of decorated bulbs made of cut glasses hanging from ceiling in my daughter's place. In afternoon hundreds of little sun spectrum shine on floor and wall. My little granddaughter enjoys so much. Well penned.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2018 4:41:00 PM

Hello Anisha, I like the colours the sun upons the stain glass. The colours are pretty. I do not blame her it is a pretty sight to see. Have a nice evening my friend.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/28/2018 12:01:00 PM

Such a peaceful place you took me too Darlene, thank you...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2018 2:24:00 PM

Hello Charlie Smith,I am happy to hear that I took you to a special place. Have a nice day my friend.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 7/27/2018 9:31:00 PM

I like this one. I can imagine the reflection. I can imagine drinking coffee in the morning looking at it. Powerful little poem about a simple thing that took me to a distant place. Great job!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2018 2:28:00 PM

hello Thimothy McGuire,thank you for the lovely comment.I am glad you enjoyed the journey to your special place. Have a nice day my friend.