The Sunshine Shining

The sun shining 
Into a round shape
Stain glass hanging
On a window pane
With pretty shades of colours
Shows the shapes seen
Of a wise o owel
On the shiny floor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Juman Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 9:45 PM
When the sunshine makes you happy the world is happy Lovely Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Hello Al Juman, so nice to meet you. Yes the sunshine does make me happy. Have a nice day my friend.
Battaglino Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Short and sweet. It's a nice poem to start the day with.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Hello Andrew Battaglino it is so nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope you have a nice evening my friend.
Gentile Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 1:31 PM
I love the stained glass imagery, Darlene, It really created beautiful thoughts, Just lovely xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Hello Mike thank you fpr the lovely comment.I also lke the stain glass, the way the sun shines upon the colours is so beautiful. Bailey my goddaughter's dog was put down. She had cancer and was in pain. Have a nice day my friend. xxx-oo
Black Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 2:16 AM
A great way to glorify the nature. Absolutely brilliant, the way you've lined up this poem is really appreciable.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Hello Augustus Black, Thank you for the lovely comment. It ws fun to do Have a nice day my friend.
Dutta Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Lovely. It reminds me large set of decorated bulbs made of cut glasses hanging from ceiling in my daughter's place. In afternoon hundreds of little sun spectrum shine on floor and wall. My little granddaughter enjoys so much. Well penned.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Hello Anisha, I like the colours the sun upons the stain glass. The colours are pretty. I do not blame her it is a pretty sight to see. Have a nice evening my friend.
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Such a peaceful place you took me too Darlene, thank you...
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Hello Charlie Smith,I am happy to hear that I took you to a special place. Have a nice day my friend.
Mcguire Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 9:31 PM
I like this one. I can imagine the reflection. I can imagine drinking coffee in the morning looking at it. Powerful little poem about a simple thing that took me to a distant place. Great job!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 2:28 PM
hello Thimothy McGuire,thank you for the lovely comment.I am glad you enjoyed the journey to your special place. Have a nice day my friend.
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