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The Sunset Watchers

There was an old sort of people that once took to the beach These old sort lived the beach and waited for the sunset They were old as time itself for they never aged They were of the beach and the beach was of them They watched every sunset from time began It was there eyes that made the sunset come and it was there sleep that brought about the night They forever watched and always kept everyday holy One day it was late and they were waiting for the sunset It did not come and they wept They disappeared into the night and were never seen again

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Date: 11/13/2014 1:18:00 PM
Unique beings hope we find them cheers geofrey
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Date: 11/12/2014 7:48:00 PM
Your alter-human beings are cool, Geoffrey! Jimbo
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Date: 11/8/2014 1:32:00 AM
Geoffrey.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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