The Sunset

The sunset, falls slowly
Blistering, she slips wantonly home
A Blossoming flower spins freely in the wind
The droplet, falls quietly, silent on the apple tree
A fluid sigh slips, and spirals among the stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Selfa Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations Aidan on winning the MAY DAY PREMIER contest!!! I hope to see more of your poems in the future for I truly enjoy your works. Keep up the good work :) -HANS
Dufaux  Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 5:20 PM
Thank you!!!
Kimathi Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 8:39 AM
I could feel the texture of your imagery!! Congrats Aidan, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
Dufaux  Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 5:20 PM
Thank you teddy!!!
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