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The Sunset

The sunset, falls slowly Blistering, she slips wantonly home A Blossoming flower spins freely in the wind The droplet, falls quietly, silent on the apple tree A fluid sigh slips, and spirals among the stars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/3/2017 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations Aidan on winning the MAY DAY PREMIER contest!!! I hope to see more of your poems in the future for I truly enjoy your works. Keep up the good work :) -HANS
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Aidan Dufaux
Date: 5/3/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thank you!!!
Date: 5/3/2017 8:39:00 AM
I could feel the texture of your imagery!! Congrats Aidan, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Aidan Dufaux
Date: 5/3/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thank you teddy!!!

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