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The Sunset

After breezy hours of a beautiful day, there comes a time when the sun fades away. Before vanishing away, laying its bright glare to rest, it stares the horizon in silence from the west. The seagulls dance in its rays through the clouds, over peaceful waves while soaring in crowds. Slowly dusk darkens, casting shadows over the bay, as the evening star ends another day. Copyright 2007 INSIGHTS by R. A. Jones - Book published by Publish America

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 6/13/2010 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:06:00 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/7/2010 12:51:00 PM
This read is like gliding through light fog. The mist dampens the brow and the words settle on paper like feathers. -Alan
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Roderick. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:16:00 AM
congrats on ur featured poem. wow i can just close my eyes and feel like im experienceing your poem. excellent use of words. keep up the good work......your friend jodie
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:30:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/2/2009 8:14:00 AM
The simplicity of nature..awe. Light & Love
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