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The Sunflower (1894) was painted by the American artist Elbridge Ayer Burbank (1858-1949)

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The Sunflower

Without the sun, sleeping;
perhaps dreaming, in the grasp
of a brown boy's clasp.
Boy’s head in the crook
of his bent elbow;
his lighter skin contrasts
with his chocolate shirt,
buttoned at the wrist.
He leans contentedly,
over the wooden chair,
whilst the head of the sunflower
with wide open sunshine,
dreams that it’s a gift
given by God,
and gladly sleeps
and dreams
until awakened.
The room’s quiescent darkness
like a warm womb.
The breast of the flower’s stem
leans close to the chair;
large green leaf, rolled;
smaller leaf, chewed.
The boy’s hands in contrast
of light and dark.
Modeling the innocence in sleep,
the one where a mother, or an artist
falls in love once again, and again,
and over again…
God, love each of these children,
given from above.
We wait for the flower to stand up;
one day a man will be as straight
as the chair; and weathered and worn.
For now, and until the end,
he will sleep on a private collector’s wall
or perhaps be sheltered in a museum.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 12:29 PM
this is a deep take on this painting, so well done :) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 6:26 PM
Thank you, Paige! The painting drew me in!
Daniel Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 2:34 AM
Great thoughts on the painting, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 7:43 AM
Thank you, Joanna! I found it quite beautiful!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 12:35 AM
You painted the picture in words Kim, beautifully done my friend!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 7:44 AM
I appreciate you, Bj! Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 7:11 PM
You did so great with this poetry form. Too bad I can't see the picture! Is entered into current contest. I bet it could win
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 10:59 AM
so potent in the elevated connection of a boy and the sunflower...mesmerizing, kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 1:39 PM
Thank you, Nette! Hugs
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