The Sunburst Sky

The sunburst sky of dainty dawn Dons colors of rose spread on petals of cloud Like a swinging tree in the wind I stand alone Hear my hued heart sing aloud. The sun from the horizon would rise high The cosmic colors would soon disappear In the blue abyss of the satin sky But from my eyes the colors won't clear. Amidst dense despair of the darkened days When in my sky the fire of the sun won't burn My eyes would send colors to the soul to stay The lost gleam in my life would then return. The splendor of the rising sun I’d capture Keep it in my adoring heart forever close Pulsating with the timeless waves of rapture Even when the sun sets I won’t lose.
February 16, 2018. Contest : All Yours (Apr 25) Sponsor : Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 8:17 PM
Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 4:16 AM
Thank you so much, Line.
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 3:59 PM
So pleased to read this lovely poem again, Subimal, and to congratulate you on another fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 11:38 PM
Thank you, Sandra for revisit.
Dutta Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 11:28 AM
CONGRATS to win top.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 11:38 PM
Thank you so much.
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your top win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 12:51 AM
Thank you, Line.
Ashley Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Your poetic expression of imagery and emotion is just superb Subimal. Congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful poem. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:12 AM
Thank you, Susan for your nice comments.
Haight Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Beautiful poem, Subimal. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:12 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Leiser Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:11 AM
Thank you, Laura.
One Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Your best poem I have read in my opinon... congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:11 AM
Thank you, Silent One for your assessment and placement.
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:06 PM
- Subimal, a piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:11 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for your generous appreciation.
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