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the sun still rises

the sun still rises
the moon also but shyly
following cycles
as certain as my feelings
for you though you notice not
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Derden Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 1:26 PM
This poem has a beautiful, quiet strength. It uses the reliable, unchanging rhythm of nature to show the steadfastness of the speaker's feelings, which is a powerful and very effective comparison.
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September 13, 2025 at 5:54 PM
I appreciate how you constructed this poem. Best wishes with this entry in the contest, hugs, Sara
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